Thank you for submitting your application to Melodies of Life! However, before we can reach a decision, we would like to see the following revisions:
* We would like a little more detail as to Asch's history. If you have a Wiki link, this can be substituted easily. * The personality section often blurs into character history, and might be easier to review if it separates the two clearly and concisely. While canon examples are great to support this section, they shouldn't override the primary function of listing how the character thinks and behaves in general. Please organize the personality section accordingly.
You have 72 hours to submit your revision. If you feel this is not enough time or if you need clarifications regarding the revision request, then please feel free to contact one of the moderators, we will get back to you as soon as possible.
REVISIONS REQUEST
* We would like a little more detail as to Asch's history. If you have a Wiki link, this can be substituted easily.
* The personality section often blurs into character history, and might be easier to review if it separates the two clearly and concisely. While canon examples are great to support this section, they shouldn't override the primary function of listing how the character thinks and behaves in general. Please organize the personality section accordingly.
You have 72 hours to submit your revision. If you feel this is not enough time or if you need clarifications regarding the revision request, then please feel free to contact one of the moderators, we will get back to you as soon as possible.