Thank you for submitting your application to Melodies of Life! However, before we can reach a decision, we would like to see the following revisions:
- We think you have a good grasp on the character's personality and voice, but we would like to see a partial rewrite of the personality section, with greater attention paid to the form, structure and grammar.
You have 72 hours to submit your revision. If you feel this is not enough time or if you need clarifications regarding the revision request, then please feel free to contact one of the moderators, we will get back to you as soon as possible.
REVISIONS REQUEST
- We think you have a good grasp on the character's personality and voice, but we would like to see a partial rewrite of the personality section, with greater attention paid to the form, structure and grammar.
You have 72 hours to submit your revision. If you feel this is not enough time or if you need clarifications regarding the revision request, then please feel free to contact one of the moderators, we will get back to you as soon as possible.