Thank you for submitting your revisions! However, there are still some issues remaining that we feel ought to be addressed:
- We feel the personality is still lacking. Even if she's only a child and has very little in the way of a personality, as it is app'd as an AU, there should be a lot more as there is more freedom to interpret the character. We would like to see a lot more to define her characters trait and go in depths.
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REVISIONS REQUEST
- We feel the personality is still lacking. Even if she's only a child and has very little in the way of a personality, as it is app'd as an AU, there should be a lot more as there is more freedom to interpret the character. We would like to see a lot more to define her characters trait and go in depths.
You have 72 hours to submit your revision. If you feel this is not enough time or if you need clarifications regarding the revision request, then please feel free to contact one of the moderators, we will get back to you as soon as possible.