Thank you for submitting your application to Melodies of Life! However, before we can reach a decision, we would like to see the following revisions:
- While the personality section does accurately describe crucial points regarding the character, we would like to see more to exemplify how important friendship is to him, using his friends and notably Sasuke as examples. We would also like to see more regarding Naruto's ability to learn, to innovate and improvise.
You have 72 hours to submit your revision. If you feel this is not enough time or if you need clarifications regarding the revision request, then please feel free to contact one of the moderators, we will get back to you as soon as possible.
REVISIONS REQUEST
- While the personality section does accurately describe crucial points regarding the character, we would like to see more to exemplify how important friendship is to him, using his friends and notably Sasuke as examples. We would also like to see more regarding Naruto's ability to learn, to innovate and improvise.
You have 72 hours to submit your revision. If you feel this is not enough time or if you need clarifications regarding the revision request, then please feel free to contact one of the moderators, we will get back to you as soon as possible.