Thank you for submitting your application to Melodies of Life! However, before we can reach a decision, we would like to see the following revisions:
- While the personality section does show some of Cloud's personality traits, we feel it reads more as a timeline depicting his life up to his canon point, rather than as a personality section. We would like to see at least a few more paragraphs focused on Cloud's personality without following a specific timeline, yet still using canon elements to justify his personality.
You have 72 hours to submit your revision. If you feel this is not enough time or if you need clarifications regarding the revision request, then please feel free to contact one of the moderators, we will get back to you as soon as possible.
REVISIONS REQUEST
- While the personality section does show some of Cloud's personality traits, we feel it reads more as a timeline depicting his life up to his canon point, rather than as a personality section. We would like to see at least a few more paragraphs focused on Cloud's personality without following a specific timeline, yet still using canon elements to justify his personality.
You have 72 hours to submit your revision. If you feel this is not enough time or if you need clarifications regarding the revision request, then please feel free to contact one of the moderators, we will get back to you as soon as possible.