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- We would like to see his relationships with important people to him, such as Anzu, Jounouchi and his grandfather, mentioned and expanded upon, and how they influenced him.
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REVISIONS REQUEST
- We would like to see his relationships with important people to him, such as Anzu, Jounouchi and his grandfather, mentioned and expanded upon, and how they influenced him.
You have 72 hours to submit your revision. If you feel this is not enough time or if you need clarifications regarding the revision request, then please feel free to contact one of the moderators, we will get back to you as soon as possible.