Thank you for submitting your application to Melodies of Life! Unfortunately, we cannot accept your application at this time for the following reasons:

We feel the personality section reads too much like a history section, as it was difficult to identify what the personality was. There were also issues regarding the personality, as it was either not properly explained, or became lost within the historical elements. Some canon terms were used interchangeably in the application even though the terms have different meanings. Furthermore, the mognet sample provided did not have a firm grip on Asch's voice or express him in a manner he would normally act.

You may apply this character again next month if you so wish.