Thank you for submitting your application to Melodies of Life! However, before we can reach a decision, we would like to see the following revisions:
* A revision of the personality section that goes into more depth concerning his motivations and his behavior, particularly when interacting with others and when striving to reach his goals. Even if it's just a guess as to how you might see him interacting with the other Heroes of Light, any further clarity that can give more insight into Ardyn as a character will help. Canon examples are helpful, but the personality points should be easily understood by anyone who is not familiar with the game from which he originates. * Clarification on the limit break. What is the 'curse' that afflicted enemies are temporarily struck with?
You have 72 hours to submit your revision. If you feel this is not enough time or if you need clarifications regarding the revision request, then please feel free to contact one of the moderators, we will get back to you as soon as possible.
REVISIONS REQUEST
* A revision of the personality section that goes into more depth concerning his motivations and his behavior, particularly when interacting with others and when striving to reach his goals. Even if it's just a guess as to how you might see him interacting with the other Heroes of Light, any further clarity that can give more insight into Ardyn as a character will help. Canon examples are helpful, but the personality points should be easily understood by anyone who is not familiar with the game from which he originates.
* Clarification on the limit break. What is the 'curse' that afflicted enemies are temporarily struck with?
You have 72 hours to submit your revision. If you feel this is not enough time or if you need clarifications regarding the revision request, then please feel free to contact one of the moderators, we will get back to you as soon as possible.