Thank you for submitting your application to Melodies of Life! However, before we can reach a decision, we would like to see the following revisions:
The application covers many of her personality traits, but also seems to be missing several key points about her as well as how she relates to other important characters in canon. It focuses heavily on her shyness and how slow she is to open up to others, which is great, but we'd like to see more of her light-hearted quirks touched upon as well. In addition, we will need clarification as to the limit break. It should have a set duration, and would be best if it focused on one specific action rather than a list of options which is better reserved for a custom job.
You have 72 hours to submit your revision. If you feel this is not enough time or if you need clarifications regarding the revision request, then please feel free to contact one of the moderators, we will get back to you as soon as possible.
REVISIONS REQUEST
The application covers many of her personality traits, but also seems to be missing several key points about her as well as how she relates to other important characters in canon. It focuses heavily on her shyness and how slow she is to open up to others, which is great, but we'd like to see more of her light-hearted quirks touched upon as well. In addition, we will need clarification as to the limit break. It should have a set duration, and would be best if it focused on one specific action rather than a list of options which is better reserved for a custom job.
You have 72 hours to submit your revision. If you feel this is not enough time or if you need clarifications regarding the revision request, then please feel free to contact one of the moderators, we will get back to you as soon as possible.